Warriors

Hi my name is Lightningstar leader of lightningclan I am writing an oc too but the point I want to give is that you have to give credit to Erin hunter. Otherwise she can sue you or throw you in jail. I don’t want anyone to go to jail. Also I would suggest thinking of lots of different names. I am working on making a list of clan members for every book. And finally I will leave you with a complement this is a really great oc it may not have the best story line but still I enjoyed reading it -Lightningstar Also advertisement me and my friend Bluecloud medicine cat of sunclan are working on a oc series called warriors Shadow within (trade mark belongs to Erin hunter) but any way keep your eyes out for it. Book 1 Fading stars coming soon. Preview: Lightningheart tensed as he heard the bushes rustling behind him. “Get off my territory,” he growled. “After to day this will only be another Skyclan hunting ground,” snarled Maystar!!!!!!! Please give you thoughts and keep an eye out for Warriors Fading Stars coming to Books soon!

haven’t read it , but it’s awesome

I don’t think neither direct hate nor defense in this book are necessary. writers improve from mistakes and practice. 1.) There is room for improvement in this book although the idea is alright. But yeah people who defend this, I think many of you don’t actually notice the tiny mistakes. 2.) Some I’ve noticed are just in spite of us people saying one bad thing. The people like shimmer and DaDerpHerp may not enjoy the book but they are giving advice to help this author be more successful. 3.)and this is why I really hate to see the people who say “don’t read the hate reviews” almost as bad as the oc haters. Like we put our time and effort into entertaining other people. And we can do whatever we want. -SpiritCatcher the Darkone (tiom :3) HEHE GET RICKROLLED *PLAYS LE MUSIC* UwU buh bye :3

You did a good job after all and you did have some incorrect spelling but that is okay and there is a big amount of mewed meowed it is kinda annoying and you are doing great so don’t listen to those haters you know they are hating on you because they don’t know you have feelings to and they need to STOP BEING BULLYS it is just not good also in the second book when we ment sample we ment give us a snip of the story you did great -Temi Roblox account TemiMoo3

Plagiarism Bad grammar Weird art Strange plot Sloppy handwriting Strange cat names And no credit to Erin hunter or Moss~shadow No hate or anything but I expect more from a highschooler

Bro stop using the names for everything that says stuff. Bro you can use the name but just skip out on the name sometimes I’ve only read the first page and I keep hearing the same name over and over again + give Erin Hunter credit☺️ NO HATE from Fucus the seawing

Their were multiple mistakes and didn’t really have any elements from warriors except the names and the clans, you also didn’t give any shoutout to Erin Hunter, so technically you commited a crime, besides that the plot was awful

i got it as a joke and multiple words were misspelled, and words were repeated a lot. i didn’t like the font, it was hard to read. honestly, i wasn’t expecting anything good from this book, plus they didn’t even give credit to Erin hunter.

My name’s Bumble’Wing :) and I’m here to tell this big argument of reviews, PLEASE READ THIS IF YOU WANT HELP WITH WRITING! ANYONE CAN READ IT! •••••••••••• REASONS WHY ••••••••••• 1•STOP WITH ALL THE ‘MEWED’ AND ‘MEOWED’ I understand they’re cats, but my lord, you can at least say ‘__ said’ or (‘__ responded/replied’ IF the cat is responding to something/someone) 2• Spelling mistakes, now, a REAL, spell-checked book wouldn’t have AS many mistakes, you can’t forget authors make mistakes too! Just be sure to check your WHOLE book before publishing ^^ 3• Plagiarism, which if you didn’t know means stealing an idea or series from someone, in this case they stole the Erin Hunter’s famous book series, Warriors. Yeah yeah, it’s a fan fiction, but it’s a illegal to post fan-fiction in a digital book store, there’s many websites you can post it in, examples can be: Wattpad, Fanfiction.net, AO3, or any other public writing apps/websites. Just please don’t post it here, as that can get you in jail possibly! 4• Cover-art…. a professional book cover is digital, not on paper with some crayon and pencil, I’m not being rude but if you want to be a successful author, make up your own book series, characters, and make a book cover digitally, you can use Canva to make it, as that’s what I use to make all my fanfiction covers <3 That’s all I have to say ♡, have a paw-some day, afternoon, or night depending where you live! Sincerely, a 11 year old 6th grader! 🦜✨Kakapo The RainWing! (WoF Fandom) 🐝✨Bumble’Wing If ThunderClan! (Warriors Fandom)

Okay furst of all ShadowClan21 or whatever I don’t think you understand that from what I read in the ratings is that this book is: Illegal, Copyright, Spelling/Grammar issues, and for some reason a annoying amount of “mews” I mean I’m only in fifth grade but I can tell this book is not okay, im not even really sure how they published it but hey author good job I’m sure even though you probably an adult now I bet there are still some surprises for you in the future keep writing!